domingo, 18 de mayo de 2008

Renoir's The Odalisk



“The Whitechapel Murderer”

Mist was flooding the East London streets as every evening in that ill-fated autumn of 1888. Bohemians went out of their dens to seek for another adventure under the night’s ancient light. The best place in Whitechapel area to satisfy their deepest and most perverse pleasures was Satin.
The brothel had a sordid atmosphere. Red bulbs illuminated the walls’ peflaking paint and the ragged curtains that functioned as the rooms’ doors. Almost naked women wandered around the place, while strange personages murmured something to their ears. A thin, pallid/pale man sat at the piano playing the same dull melody over and over again while a group of drunk men kept on prattling.
However, beyond that fake joy, there was something else. Horror had entered their careless souls after hearing about the fifth murder committed by the infamous “Leather Apron”.
The front door opened slowly with a creaky noise. A burly figure stood firmly at the entrance. His defiant look paralyzed the habitués who could conspicuously perceive an evil aura around him. No sooner had he stepped into the room than Thelma, the procurer, grabbed his arm took him upstairs. He was one of Satin’s renowned clients. Thelma, praised for being the best belly dancer in London and, as such, known as The Odalisque, was to begin her vengeance.
She had spent months, more precisely since the 31st August, the day the first murder took place, watching cautiously and patiently this man’s moves. Her wrath had reached levels that were beyond description when she got to know about the horrid nature of the crimes. This had led her to cleverly plan every detail so as to wreak revenge on Jack the Ripper.
Once upstairs, she closed the door behind her.
“Make yourself comfortable,” she muttered, giving him a sharp look.
She handled him some opium to smoke and laid down on a thick with dust old sofa. Thelma stared at him suggestively while she sweet-talked him.
The odalisque started shaking her hips skilfully in a provoking way. Strangely, Jack began feeling dizzy although he had regularly smoked this herb before. Meanwhile, the odalisque continued with her vibrating and sinuous movements while he laid on a ramshackle bed with his feet too numb to run away, but still not sleeping.
When she realized his dizziness, she stopped dancing and, with a sudden movement, she clutched at a candelabrum and violently hit Jack the Ripper’s head making him fall off the bed. Blinded by anger, she kept beating the inert body screaming bloodcurdling curses at him until her strength abandoned her.

By: Gisela Cubilla & Melina Lasorella

8 comentarios:

Ikelarile dijo...

After ten minutes of uncontrolled violent performance, the man’s body was barely recognizable as human. It had been a real blood bath…skin peaces stuck to the walls now mingled with the peeling paint giving the room a horrifying colourful layout. The puddle of blood smoothly leaked through the floorboards. It was a clear case of using a sledgehammer to crack a nut. She remained stiff staring at the scene trying to figure out what her next step would be. She took a dark blanket and, as if it were a decorative paper, she gift-wrapped what was left of him and tied it firmly. Despite tiredness, exhilaration gave her strength enough to push the bulk through her bedroom window, which conveniently faced a deserted alley. The swashbuckling odalisque managed to avoid the pianist’s eagle eye, and found her way to the corpse. East London mist protected her from being noticed by curious pedestrians. She dragged her victim towards a lightless area…

The following morning, a terrifying headline was published by every major English paper:


JACK THE RIPPER IS BACK

September 24th, 1888, Whitechapel. An increasing crime wave is taking place in Whitechapel. According to the police report, at 2:13am today, the bodies of other two victims of the so-called “Jack the ripper” were found in a sordid alley near a brothel. The victims of this recent brutal double slaying were a middle-aged man whose identity hasn’t been revealed yet, and a young dancer, presumably the procurer of the brothel previously mentioned…

My dear reader you may probably be having doubts about the article’s accuracy. However, I assure you it is reliable information. Just bear this in mind: you never know what, or who, might hide in the embracing arms of gentle darkness. Prejudices can sometimes stab us in the back.

Ikelarile dijo...

Yes...I admit it...I like stories in which pp die...I don't know whether it's because I watch too many crime series or what but that's the way it is...

Girls, as regards your story...well..I may say I'm a little worried, my god, I don't think I'll remember so many new words :P!! what I intend to say here is, the wide vocabulary of ur narration is in a word admirable...great use of adjectives, marvellous descriptions, really, while reading the story I felt just as if I had a camera. lol


see ya! looking forward to reading more of your work. xD

Ikelarile dijo...

fe de erratas: "odalisk"...instead of "odalisque"...sorry!

antonela dijo...

“Where am I?” asked the odalisque to herself after realizing that was not her bedroom. She tried to stand up but her efforts were worthless. She remained calm while thinking about what could have gone wrong. Thelma knew she had killed the man but she was not able to recall what had happened after the murder. She heard voices mumbling something about the police coming and the need to get rid of someone. Then, she became aware that she had to run away right off. There was no time left, the door opened and she was lost.

“Thelma, dear, come with me, it’s time you vanished,” Satin said with great concern. “We will not come back until people forget about this crime, is that ok Thelma?” The odalisque was speechless. Satin was talking to her for the first time in years. She helped the astonished odalisque to beak out of this hopeless situation.

In a few weeks, she found herself wandering around Paris with no clear ideas in mind. What was she actually going to do in that city? Thelma did not belong there. In fact, she did not belong to anywhere, she had always dreamt about finding her place in the world but she had missed that opportunity once and again.

Several months later, the odalisque was still a desperately lost soul until she hit upon a reasonable idea: why not going back to the brothel? Luckily, she had arrived at the appropriate place to carry out her plan: Paris.

antonela dijo...

Hey! what Maria says is right!
the vocabulary is great...u've spent hours looking the words up in the dictonary, haven't u?!What hardworking mates I have!

Liliana dijo...

Wow!!! I enjoyed reading your version of the story!! it's obvious you love mistery. Are you a big fan of C.S.I.?

Liliana dijo...

María, the previous comment is for you. I forgot to include your name!

Liliana dijo...

Anto, good end!!! Paris... yes! the right place, isn't it?